Saturday, March 3, 2012
Classification Outro II
There are many types of peanut butter on the grocer's shelves today. Some are peanut imposters; secretly pretending to be the real thing, but when I read the labels, with their sugars, emulsifiers and other fillers, I know that I am eating someone's make believe idea of peanut butter. That's what creamy peanut butter is. Crunchy peanut butter is a step up, but still lacks the top of the jar oils and often has its share of fillers, like creamy. Only all natural crunchy peanut butter exemplifies the true nature of peanut butter, with its simple ingredient list of peanuts, just peanuts. What more do you need?
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I like the development in this version, just as long as you haven't shot your bolt in the first graf--tell us about your kitchen, your family, your idea of pb & j and so on in the support grafs.
ReplyDeleteJust realized you have this labelled as 'outro'--well, it sounds like an outro at the close but if it really is an outro it's a lot more summary than a real wrap up. I could see it better as an intro.
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